Kitfox and sugar : Till all are one

This piece is nice, I really like it! It gives a nice melodic carribean feel to it mixed with romantic serenity.

Personally, I think you did very well done with the etchings for the streaks made up against the shirts give them a good texture. Along with the outlining of the forms, I think you made the posing effective enough to convey the setting and mood of the piece.

However, while I admire the detailed and breathtaking beach background for its pastel-like shading, I am curious about the shading for the characters themselves: When I am looking at the lady, I can't help but feel it is a little imbalanced with the tail and fingers being a deep brown while the rest of the figure doesn't pertain any shading like it and I feel there could have been more added to it to make a more noticable pattern. This plus potentially adding more shading to it, and I think the guy's left ear is slightly skewed from his head. Otherwise, I find nothing else to complain about.

The rest of it is nicely detailed, and now that I examine it more, I feel this might have been intentional (except for the ear bit). Otherwise, compared to your previous works, it is a good addition to your collection as well as an improvement as your strokes are becoming much cleaner and more precise every time.

I commend you for it and I hope you enjoy this review, as it is my first DeviantART review. Thanks.